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for a few years i've
lived in your shadow
but now i can't afford the
mortgage so i think
it's time for me to
pack my things and

go.

(if you miss me
don't send postcards
because


i can't read.)
full title: the grass is always greener on your side

they'll find someone else in a
heartbeat.
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:iconthetinmanchronicle:
thetinmanchronicle Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009
oh lord, this is genius. kind of reminds of a sort of william carlos williams/ bukowski fusion.
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:iconherbodyismycoffin:
herbodyismycoffin Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009   Writer
oh my, thanks :)
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:iconxxlonesomedovexx:
XxLonesomeDovexX Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
aSDHNV'm';SEFB
this.
is.
just.
undescribable.
i'minlovewithit.
:heart:
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:iconherbodyismycoffin:
herbodyismycoffin Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009   Writer
oh dear...
i've never seen anyone react like this
to something i've written.
thanks.
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:iconxxlonesomedovexx:
XxLonesomeDovexX Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
rly?
that surprises me :)
you're welcome!
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:iconherbodyismycoffin:
herbodyismycoffin Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2009   Writer
i'm not too popular yet. i have some friends that are up there, but not me.
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:iconxxlonesomedovexx:
XxLonesomeDovexX Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2009
well I'm sure you will be
very popular soon :)
I wish you the best of luck, friend :heart:
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:iconherbodyismycoffin:
herbodyismycoffin Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2009   Writer
i hope.
i wish you luck, too.
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:iconxxlonesomedovexx:
XxLonesomeDovexX Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009
awh, thanks :hug:
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:iconherbodyismycoffin:
herbodyismycoffin Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2009   Writer
you're welcome!
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:iconxcaroline:
xcaroline Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2009
ilovethis.
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:iconherbodyismycoffin:
herbodyismycoffin Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2009   Writer
thankyou.
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2009
i kind of very much enjoyed this, for which i'm kind of very sorry.
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:iconherbodyismycoffin:
herbodyismycoffin Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2009   Writer
why?
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:iconohsostarryeyed:
ohsostarryeyed Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009
i feel wrong for liking this when there is clearly no kind explanation for doing so
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:iconherbodyismycoffin:
herbodyismycoffin Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009   Writer
i understand completely.
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:iconcoldfalafel:
coldfalafel Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
pretty
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:iconherbodyismycoffin:
herbodyismycoffin Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009   Writer
thanks
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:iconcoldfalafel:
coldfalafel Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome
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pichu4850 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009
hmm i love the postcard bit.
makes me think of the inability to do many things on one's own because of living in someone else's shadow, so it results in being oppressed or sheltered or something.

me rambling.

nice, simple. [:
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:iconherbodyismycoffin:
herbodyismycoffin Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009   Writer
thank you.
i liked you rammbling. it's quite alright.
thank you again.
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:iconchloroformboy:
ChloroformBoy Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009
i like the titleeeee
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:iconherbodyismycoffin:
herbodyismycoffin Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2009   Writer
thank youuuuu
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